The reasons for re-titling our film is because of the fact that we thought the feel of the first title didn't match our film. We spoke to our teacher and she felt that the title could be subtle and clever - making the audience think about the title's relevance to the film. We felt that The Hollow Girl also was a bit too confusing. So once again we sat and thought of ideas as tomorrow we shall be finishing our editing by adding about half an minute worth of more footage to the film - after having discussed taking out the footage of the teenagers.and so above you can see a screenshot showing our NEW title written in the sky near the red balloon. I think this works very effectively, as it fades in and out of the shot.